
The Red Camellia
Noir Genre – 10 mins.
Rancho La Puerta, Tecate, Mexico
Writing Class, August, 2007
Instructor: April Smith
Instructions were to write a story based on Little Red Riding Hood in the Noir Genre. I changed the characters around a little, making Red Riding Hood the villain.
The Red Camellia walked the streets; the dark, dank, back alleys of Manchester. She wore red; just enough to titillate and suggest the promise of a wild ride. She saw him walking down the station forecourt searching for a taxi. Like a slinky on a string she oozed up to him, trailing wafts of cheap Eau de Cologne.
“I’m not buying!” he barked, pulling his trilby down over his eyes. She was selling but was more interested in taking. A cab pulled round the corner and he slid into the opened door. She slipped in beside him.
“I’m still not buying!” he spat the words out of the corner of his mouth. They rode in silence until they reached Chorlton-cum-Hardy, a working class suburb where the street walkers were common as muck.
“Keep the change.” He paid the taxi. She rolled out of the taxi after him, grabbing at his raincoat. Waiting at a nearby gate was an older woman; motherly, plump, smiling, welcoming. She scowled at the red harlot and made a gesture to a young “bobby” standing in the shadows, who hurried over with cuffs and dire warnings.
“We got another one, thanks Ma! Another one bites the dust.” said the man in the trilby.